Sunday, March 23, 2008

Hemorrhage; of the heart

Deep inside my heart bleeds

Don't ask for I know not why

Deep inside my heart pleads

Mercy! Mercie! Please hear my cry

Its losing heart, its about to die


Deep inside my heart bleeds

The pain, the anguish.....

A dark cloud...... it obliterates the sky

Deep inside my heart bleeds

Worry not though...'twill soon be dry

6 comments:

neema divine said...

this is deep...

KK said...

hope u can swim Neema:)

~beth ♥ said...

Wow! This is really, really good ... deep and poignant, but really good.

31337 said...

Dude, share what you been smoking, could you email me the the name of your dealer? Mine has been diluting mine with real grass.

KK said...

Thanks Beth.... Am humbled truly by your compliment.

@ 31337: Dude you are too funny. Unfortunately, mine does a very strict background check on his potential clients. I fear that your picture taking, numeric spelling tendancies would throw up some major red flags.... But since u've kinda grown on me, I'll consider it:)

archie4 said...

at the risk of sounding mean...nah, that would be cruel to suggest you swallow a mop...beautiful poem though. oooh, i know, swallow some honey instead. it's all sticky and it will plug the hole and...okay, i'm pretty sure i've met your dealer :)