Don't ask for I know not why
Deep inside my heart pleads
Mercy! Mercie! Please hear my cry
Its losing heart, its about to die
Deep inside my heart bleeds
The pain, the anguish.....
A dark cloud...... it obliterates the sky
Deep inside my heart bleeds
Worry not though...'twill soon be dry
6 comments:
this is deep...
hope u can swim Neema:)
Wow! This is really, really good ... deep and poignant, but really good.
Dude, share what you been smoking, could you email me the the name of your dealer? Mine has been diluting mine with real grass.
Thanks Beth.... Am humbled truly by your compliment.
@ 31337: Dude you are too funny. Unfortunately, mine does a very strict background check on his potential clients. I fear that your picture taking, numeric spelling tendancies would throw up some major red flags.... But since u've kinda grown on me, I'll consider it:)
at the risk of sounding mean...nah, that would be cruel to suggest you swallow a mop...beautiful poem though. oooh, i know, swallow some honey instead. it's all sticky and it will plug the hole and...okay, i'm pretty sure i've met your dealer :)
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